They where known in a hospital,
they are dentists.
My father get in love first.
My mother married with the incorrect man first,
my father wait.
Over tow years,
my mother separated for the incorrect man.
She get in love whith my father,
and they marrie.
They steal been dentist.
And now they are a family,
three child they have.
They steal been in love,
and they will continuous beeing in love.
Good work. The poem is nicely organised but there are some mistakes as regards vocabulary or spelling that could have been corrected before published if you had done a deeper revision. If you are narrating in the past, make sure all the verbs are in this tense. You also forgot to point out what literary devices you´ve used.
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